May 9, 2016 at 9:19 pm
Richard, there is some excellent audio production and post-production work evident here and your sound helps to create a convincing space. Your audio log is well produced, although the reverb is perhaps a little strong and would have benefited from being toned down. I like the detail with the pencil, which works well and your script and performance are effective. The footsteps help to add authenticity to your environment too, although the buzz is quite loud and intrusive and, as you correctly identified in your posts, the loop is very audible. Overall, however, this is a good effort. Well done!
May 17, 2016 at 12:09 pm
Overall the techniques used in this bunker are good. You model and texture to a high standard. The problem I have is there is no visual atmosphere in your bunker. I feel it is too clean to be a bunker during the war. It is overlit so you should decrease the attenuation of light. You demonstrated some interaction in your bunker by having a playable environment and interactive sound.
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